3 reviews
You have a lead character: immigrant boy
You have a goal: Needs to pee
You have conflict: language barrier prevents him
However, you still have to ask yourself, will an audience want to watch a two-hour movie about a boy needing to pee.
That being said, if this is a 2-minute short film I think it could work.
If this is a short then it should be fine. :-) A feature? No.
"When nature calls, an immigrant student who speaks no English?must find a way to communicate with the teacher his growing need to pee, without embarrassing himself on the first day of school"