At a diversity leadership convention, a straight male accidentally walks into the women?s restroom..

by socs_123 Penpusher · 236 pts 476 views

3 reviews

variable Summitry · 18,541 pts

Agreed with Richiev. Also,
An Inciting incident MUST IMPLY CONFLICT
Which drives the protagonist towards an objective Goal
A simple edit for the event could be --
"When a straight male accidentally GETS LOCKED into the women?s restroom........"

It lacks the "high stakes" to sustain a feature length film. Good Luck socs_123!!

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

This is a situation not a story.
In a story you have an event, such as you have described, this leads to your character having a goal and something standing in the way of the goal.

What is your lead characters goal?
What is standing in the lead characters way?