When a flourishing actress plans to murder her teenage heartthrob, she sleeps her way through Hollywood, before his final Premier.

Starfuckers, Inc.

6 reviews

Tor Dollhouse 0 pts

It's a Lolita-esqu neo noir with black dramedy elements : )

"When an obsessed actress..."

Time to hit the think tank again as I feel the concept is plagued by confusing elements and mediocrity. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and pushing me to do better :D p.s Im still keeping the name!

debbiemoon Penpusher · 26 pts

What's the tone here? Horror, black comedy?

I don't think you should worry at all about the title. If people don't like it, it'll get changed at some later date. For now, it's striking and memorable.

I think we need to know why she wants him dead, and why sleeping her way through Hollywood is going to accomplish that. Why is she killing him at the premiere?

cicpisces 0 pts

Yeh, not sure about the motivation here. Sounds like it could be more of a horror. If she kills the men she sleeps with in her attempts to get to him. Not sure why she has become so disturbed either. Is it something he did to her? The fact he was the reason she became an actress isn't clear.