When a cursed goddess is invited to partake in speed dating, she must try to find a lover who can withstand her curse, and her temper.

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3 reviews

Loe Jones Penpusher · 29 pts

Thank you for the feedback! I appreciate it. Would something like this work:

When a cursed goddess is invited to partake in speed dating, she must try to find a lover who can be with her without touch, or else have their heart stop.

Gabbie.Michelle Penpusher · 26 pts

hah personally, I still think it should've been the feast of the gods but nah, what you have now is really good. It is good, simple and to the point. If you want, you can try to add to it to add more meat to it but it sounds really good how it is now.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

A solid logline.

If you can describe the curse in a word or two you might want to add it to the logline, but don't add it if describing the curse would take an entire sentence.