Gabbie.Michelle

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When an 18-year-old female accidentally leaves a love letter to her female crush on the kitchen counter, she must find a way to come out to her parents before her mother accuses her father of cheating.

June 23, 2022

on When her family unexpectedly comes back into her life after years of estrangement, a young woman must confront her past and the people who will never accept her for who she is.

I love the amount of detail that is provided in this logline while also not giving away too much of the storyline. the only thing I would suggest would be to add in the time period as I think i…
on When a cursed goddess is invited to partake in speed dating, she must try to find a lover who can withstand her curse, and her temper.

hah personally, I still think it should've been the feast of the gods but nah, what you have now is really good. It is good, simple and to the point. If you want, you can try to add to it…
on When an 18-year-old female accidentally leaves a love letter to her female crush on the kitchen counter, she must find a way to come out to her parents before her mother accuses her father of cheating.

would something like that work better?
on When an 18-year-old female accidentally leaves a love letter to her female crush on the kitchen counter, she must find a way to come out to her parents before her mother accuses her father of cheating.

Thanks for the feedback. Would something like "When an 18 year old closeted lesbian accidentally leaves a love letter out in the open, confessing her feelings to one of her classmates, she must bite the bullet and come out to…