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How does this sound??"When a trapped demon escapes, an unlikely duo of a faithless nun and a reluctant magician are tasked by the queen to recapture it and save the kingdom."
Now it sounds like a comedy/action.
This can't be about the demon, it must be about the mortals that we will identify with as the viewer.
A magician and former nun are at odds when it comes to saving their people from a rampant demon before it enslaves their entire kingdom forever.
Conflict is king, even if they wind up working together, I assume they have very different means to accomplish the same goal.
"When a captured demon finally finds a way to get rid of,"? -- What does this mean up until the comma? Is this about the fight between 2 demons, one captured in a kingdom and another looking to attack?
Therefore, what does the magician and ex-nun exactly have to do to turn the tide of the fight?
I'm confused.