When a billionaire futurist is killed, a vengeful ex-assassin is forced to confront her sanity as she fights to discover who has been manipulating her memories to make her the world?s most feared killer.

4 reviews

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

The latest draft of the logline lacks a clear cause and effect relationship between the inciting incident and goal.
Ask yourself: how does one event motivate the other?

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

Agreed, with above comments, how does the murder of the billionaire relate to the lead character?

Foxtrot25 Summitry · 17,380 pts

Yet still, what is the connection between an innocent billionaire getting killed and your anti hero, the assassin?

Going from a hitman to an army ranger is quite a drastic change. What prompted that?