Two strangers meet on a blind date find out how close they were but never met

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BenGilani Logliner · 360 pts

Oh, that's great. Congratulations. Do you mean you finished the script for the above logline? If so, I suggest you include the conflict in your logline, too. That makes it way more exciting to read. This is what producers are hunting for.

Good luck

Ben

almostfilmmaker Penpusher · 24 pts

Hey Ben

Thanks for pointing that out. I agree, it can be a little confusing. By close I mean they were close in physical proximity but never actually met. I actually finished a script.

BenGilani Logliner · 360 pts

Hello almostfilmmaker,

I like the concept. However, I need to know what you mean by writing "they were close"? Close like they both lived in the same area? They were "close" relatives? or close like having things in common?
Personally, I have a pretty good idea of what you are trying to say by the word "close". But there are many out there that need a clearer picture.

Writing a short synopsis along with your logline always helps.

I hope this helps.