(TV) Dangerous Exploits follows a young man's journey from a womanizer to a brilliant sociopathic manipulator, starting with his graduate studies of psychology at Arizona State University.

Dangerous Exploits

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imluvdbyjesus 0 pts

Ok, your protagonist is obvious, the young man, but what is his goal(s) that he is trying to accomplish? Is it to become a "brilliant sociopathic manipulator"?
And what/who is the antagonist that he must overcome? What is the conflict in your story?

samklein24 0 pts

hmm very good point, that is definitely something I need to think hard about for this logline; why the viewer would be on his side

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

>>but you?re on his side.

Are we? Why should we be? Give us a good reason. Which, I admit is difficult to do given the constraints of a logline. What is there about your sociopath that will engage our interest, perchance sympathy, even as we don't like how he operates?