To save a retirement home from bankruptcy, its uptight director must convince her estranged, obnoxious father to make a significant donation, or face losing her job and custody of her daughter. But when he insists on playing a role in running the home, the director must balance the need to keep her father’s money with the increasing annoyance of the home’s residents with the coarse intruder.

It's a tv show. One-camera comedy. The problem is supposed to go on forever. It's the engine of the show.

Hey,
I think Odie's response is an improvement. However I think it's missing an action. At the moment there isn't a solution to the problem in either logline which means the movie could go on forever. How does the uptight director solve her issues? When you work that out I would make sure to include it in the logline.

Hi Michael, your concept is great but as Odie suggested, you probably want to make it shorter to read ! Good luck on your project. Sounds like a fun movie to watch !

Leaning towards:
“An uptight director's cash-strapped retirement home is turned topsy-turvy when accepting a bailout from her estranged father and his ensuing meddling sparks an old-folks revolt”

Make this yours, take care.