The acrimonious break-up of the house couple sparks a cold war between the men and women living in a student house in 1980s Manchester (UK).

by Tusk 61 pts March 30, 2018

2 reviews

dpg 112,231 pts March 30, 2018 ★ Accepted

>>>sparks a cold war

That's a predicament, a situation for a plot.? But the logline doesn't follow through with a plot..? And a logline is a concise statement of a plot.

And we have no idea who is the protagonist.

Who is the protagonist?? What is his or her objective goal?

harry Logliner · 470 pts March 30, 2018

I'm not sure what a "house couple" is. Are they the owners of the house the students are living in? I think you need something juicier here that draws us in and suggests what the battle in the film might be about and what's at stake.