Tusk

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on An alien living as their friendly neighbourhood mechanic, must prevent his beloved street from getting sold block-by-block before the greedy billionaire visits his garage

I like this - a familiar type of plot but with a twist that gives it an extra level of jeopardy that we immediately understand. If he can change his appearance I'd want that information in the logline (so "A…
on During a wedding rehearsal, a bridesmaid is taken by pirates and becomes the prize of the battle of ego vs revenge between two of the most powerful pirate ships.

Could you fit in when it's set? Is it now, or in the past? Could slip that information in before "most powerful" in your current logline (e.g - "two of the early 21st century's/Jacobian era's/whenever's most powerful...")