Mick is placed in charge of security USB key containing a top secret list of field agents… which gets accidentally eaten by his Scottish Terrier, McCloud. )
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CyberOpsAU – Episode 2 – Uploaded to the Cloud
Thanks for the comment Kriss. Yup, it's a sitcom, mostly farce.
Is it a kind of spoof/satirical tv programme? When started reading it I thought not this story line again but the spin at the end was funny and I liked it. Richiev is right it does need the what does he do next but it is a funny spin on an overdone premise.
Damn, you're completely right. My current outline has the actual stakes/consequences as pretty weak. I think I need to amp it up a bit.
Hey, this process really works :)