An unhinged loner masquerading in his late father?s police uniform investigates the apparent suicide of his only friend, a rookie Los Angeles cop with a dark secret. Can he walk the thin blue line?

I would have to agree with the above comments. It is a really interesting idea but putting on his Dad's uniform doesn't sound like a fetish. Also the word fetish makes it sound more comedic and by reading the log line it doesn't sound like it is.

The idea is certainly different and I like the idea of a man who isn't a cop investigating a death, that part was nice but yeah the final part is slightly cliched. What will keep him working on the investigation? Could there be corruption and he learns his Dad is a corrupt cop? Could this loner want to continue the investigation as he now has 'friends' in the force? Could the killer send a note to his Father taunting him but the loner thinks it is for him?

Premise is good but feel it needs more of a hook.

Interesting premise and a movie I'd like to see. I've only got two suggestions - getting rid of the second sentence as it's both a cliche and unnecessary, and finding a stronger hook as the situation itself may not be quite enough.

Good luck.

Heya,

I like the idea of a movie named "Fetish Cop"... but the concept of "Fetish" doesn't exactly come across in the logline.

Interesting concept though.