>>>the detectives were referred to either as officer? or by their rank. Is that accurate or were they addressed as detective?
Either is accurate depending: civilians may call cops "officers". Within the department, as in the military, cops address other cops by the title of their rank as matter of hierarchy, chain of command, respect for authority; after all, law enforcement agencies are quasi-military organizations.
Thanks for the clarification. The set up for the plot -- let alone the plot itself -- seems quite convoluted. Certainly quite a challenge to boil down to 30 words. Or even 40.
BTW: given that your story is about the LAPD in the same time period as "L.A. Confidential", script readers, directors and producers are inevitably going to compare it with that movie. The question your story will be interrogated with is: what makes this different from, as good as -- better -- than "L.A. Confidential"?
Ain't fair -- but that's show business. (Can you select another time period? What's so special about your version of the mid-50's that sets it apart from the 50's of "L.A. Confidential"?)