Los Angeles, 1956. An ambitious prosecutor wants to know why the police were so eager to close the file on the suspicious death of a wealthy businessman. When his off the books investigation uncovers a link between that case and the murder of a young prostitute twenty years earlier, both his career and his life are endangered.

Red Light Madonna

6 reviews

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

Post WW2, late 40's, would work better. Pre-Parker and the department reeked with corruption.

And that could be a story pay off: the scandal not only topples the bad cop, it triggers the appointment of a good cop like Parker to clean house.

stumptown Penpusher · 40 pts

I might be able to move it back to the late 1940's. I think I'd lose the flavor of what I want in the story if I went backward or forward too much. Thanks for the info about the LAPD.

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

>>>the detectives were referred to either as officer? or by their rank. Is that accurate or were they addressed as detective?

Either is accurate depending: civilians may call cops "officers". Within the department, as in the military, cops address other cops by the title of their rank as matter of hierarchy, chain of command, respect for authority; after all, law enforcement agencies are quasi-military organizations.

Thanks for the clarification. The set up for the plot -- let alone the plot itself -- seems quite convoluted. Certainly quite a challenge to boil down to 30 words. Or even 40.

BTW: given that your story is about the LAPD in the same time period as "L.A. Confidential", script readers, directors and producers are inevitably going to compare it with that movie. The question your story will be interrogated with is: what makes this different from, as good as -- better -- than "L.A. Confidential"?

Ain't fair -- but that's show business. (Can you select another time period? What's so special about your version of the mid-50's that sets it apart from the 50's of "L.A. Confidential"?)