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What classic movie is this supposed to be a logline for?
It is too wordy. The first sentence is probably not even needed. You also are trying to describe too much of the plot. Really just try to cut it down to the inciting incident and what that leads into. So, maybe something like: After being kicked out by his father, a boy resorts to prostitution in order to supply his addictions that leads him to a spiritual road to recovery.
Or something like that.