GStar
Samurai · 566 points
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Those were all really great comments guys and really makes me think about my character and how I can make him more interesting, there's a strong reaction from the drug dealer angle which is interesting given that there my exposure…
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I think it's an interesting premise but I feel like it has the potential to be really confusing for an audience. (which is OK if you're a really experienced screenwriter) ? The investigation of the wedding party isn't meaty enough…