Jaws on the Moors.

While this made me laugh, exactly - it's a tagline. Also, as someone with Yorkshire blood, the idea intrigues me but the Moors are known to be pretty deserted. We need to know who the victims would be - a village? A family plus some visitors?

Hi Robert,

Thanks for posting. However, this is not a logline. It is a tag line.

Check our 'how to' section: https://loglines.org/howto

Then post your new draft in the comments and I'll change it in the heading as well.

Hi Robert,

Thanks for posting. However, this is not a logline. It is a tag line.

Check our 'how to' section: https://staging.loglineit.com/howto

Then post your new draft in the comments and I'll change it in the heading as well.