Jack loves three things ? his family, pussy and profanity ? when his son drops the c-bomb at school, his wife gives him an ultimatum, sex or swearing.

Auto-correct on iphone gets `there` wrong but mucks up `anyone`. My bad.

I`m new here so maybe I don`t `get it` yet, but from what I`ve read this is a testing ground for potential films, pre-production.

If so I`d personally love to kill this concept now. To qoute Malcolm Tucker of In The Thick of It, another sweary man; `I`ll come over their and stick it in fucking floatation tank, and pump it full of sewage till it fucking drowns`. I paraphrase.

No decent human bieng is going to allow thier 7 yr old boy to KNOWN the C-word, nevermind rehearse it for a movie. Would you really want to watch such a thing?! I`d avoid such a puerile, immature script by miles.

You play on every clich? and lazy stereotype available, so there`s nothing remotely intriguing to make nyone bother reading. Let me guess, he chooses sex and stops swearing. So what?! He sounds like a parasite. Boohoo he was bullied, he should man up and be a parent. Urgh.

Don`t waste anymore of your life on this - stab it. Burn it. Bury it. And move on. Preferably far, far, far away.

Maybe he means that you need an em-dash (long dash), instead of your short hyphen/dash between the two clauses?