Jack loves three things ? his family, pussy and profanity ? when his son drops the c-bomb at school, his wife gives him an ultimatum, sex or swearing.

Auto-correct on iphone gets `there` wrong but mucks up `anyone`. My bad.

I`m new here so maybe I don`t `get it` yet, but from what I`ve read this is a testing ground for potential films, pre-production.

If so I`d personally love to kill this concept now. To qoute Malcolm Tucker of In The Thick of It, another sweary man; `I`ll come over their and stick it in fucking floatation tank, and pump it full of sewage till it fucking drowns`. I paraphrase.

No decent human bieng is going to allow thier 7 yr old boy to KNOWN the C-word, nevermind rehearse it for a movie. Would you really want to watch such a thing?! I`d avoid such a puerile, immature script by miles.

You play on every clich? and lazy stereotype available, so there`s nothing remotely intriguing to make nyone bother reading. Let me guess, he chooses sex and stops swearing. So what?! He sounds like a parasite. Boohoo he was bullied, he should man up and be a parent. Urgh.

Don`t waste anymore of your life on this - stab it. Burn it. Bury it. And move on. Preferably far, far, far away.

Maybe he means that you need an em-dash (long dash), instead of your short hyphen/dash between the two clauses?

I like what you're doing.

Thanks, timmyelliot, I have given some insight into why Jack loves swearing so much below...

Thanks, Bryson. Jack is definitely faithful. He is a good man at heart, he developed a penchant for swearing when being bullied at high school. It became his defence mechanism in life to protect himself from being hurt and humiliated again... so his challenge is to actually reveal his true self to the word by not swearing anymore.