(Drama) Eight strangers will be forced to make a decision that will alter each other?s lives forever. Whether for love, success, money, loyalty, redemption or life itself, the only thing they know for sure is that one way or another, they must choose.

Awesome feedback! Thank you guys!!!

You need to mention what the decision is. All this stuff -- love, success, money, loyalty, redemption or life itself -- is too vague. You need to be specific with the protagonist's goals and what the actual conflict is.

I agree with Jim's comments.

The problem is, after reading the logline, I have no idea what the story is about.