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where's the good guy I am supposed to be rooting for?
I fail to see how this is a comedic premise, but that aside, the logline casts the kid as?a villain, or at least as victim of others rather than a (heroic) agent of his own fate. Loglines are about people who become agents of their own fate in spite of adverse circumstances thrust upon them.
Ergo, the logline needs to state his freely chosen objective goal in spite of the coercion. ?How does he intend to defy and defeat the conspiracy?