Being held responsible for the death of the tiger she took care of, a scared single mother has one chance to save her job as a zookeeper: to tame an untamable tiger.

??That, and the fact that she has no money, would make it a disaster if she loses her job??

I disagree ? You lose a job so you tighten the ol? buckle spend less and get another.

Your response indicates that you are entirely set on this as your story, yet the rhetoric in most of the comments you?ve received is that the premise is flawed and would benefit from change. Study all the comments you?ve already gotten and consider making some fundamental changes to the concept.

It's important not to box your MC into a person who can't communicate on screen to the audience, and you can always have another character interact on the special person's behalf. They learn that they need one another.

In other words, I want to see a character get challenged and then watch them react so that I can think about what I would do if those things happen to me. Character relation. I'm not really interested in a person already introverted unless there is a good reason for it.

"But how on earth can i write all this, and an inciting incident, and? in one sentence???" Well, that's the trick ain't it? It could be that there's just no way to include everything you want. Explore the logline from as many angles as possible and ask others which they prefer.

Responsible for the tragic death of a tiger, a recluse zookeeper has (days/months) to tame a replacement or else her boss threatens to ruin her career.

Thanks guys.
Actually she is a single mother with a five year old daughter. She's unable to speak to people but she's great at communicating with animals. That, and the fact that she has no money, would make it a disaster if she loses her job. But how on earth can i write all this, and an inciting incident, and... in one sentence???