As a fascist state that controls the GMO tech that feeds the population seeks to secure its hold on power, the poorer farmers and climate refugees in the south embark on a secret mission to get back natural seeds from a heavily fortified island.

New Dawn

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dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

There are two plot issues in this version: monopolization of the seed supply via GMO and replacing peasant farmers with robots. Which one is the inciting incident? Which one constitutes the main struggle of the plot?

And while raiding a seed bank may enable the peasant farmers to reclaim their supply of seeds, what will it do to eliminate the robots?

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

When Subas cut's off their food supply, a young farmer must lead a raid of the heavily guarded seed bank if his village is to survive.

paultemporal 0 pts

Many thanks for the input. The missing elements are in my notes - just not yet in the logline. The update looks like this:

Valour is left to lead a ragged band of survivors to raid a remote seed bank, after Subas cuts off their supply to GMO seeds and seeks to wipe out the last of the refugees and replace them with robots.