?Appalachian inbreeds homestead a beautiful- but occupied- house in Beverly Hills, terrorizing and slaughtering the family, until one of the children escapes, turning the tables on the killers.?

(Sorry for the double post.)

I feel the title is a little bit at odds with your logline ? Beverly Killbillies? sounds like a dark comedy, maybe grindhouse, but the logline is definitely not comedic. Deliverance meets I Spit on Your Grave. I?d totally watch this.

Inbreeds? is a verb, so maybe inbreds? is more appropriate? Homestead? tripped me up too ? brought to mind visions of farming? Thoughts of children being terrorized and slaughtered gives me the ickies. Is the protag really a child or more of a teenager?

Appalachian inbreds break into a Beverly Hills mansion, terrorizing and slaughtering the family one by one, until one of the children escapes and gives the killers a taste of their own medicine.

or

When Appalachian inbreds break into his Beverly Hills home and terrorizes his family, the eldest son/daughter escapes and turns the tables on the home invaders.

I fee the title is a little bit at odds with your logline - "Beverly Killbillies" sounds like a dark comedy, maybe grindhouse, but the logline is definitely not comedic. Deliverance meets I Spit on Your Grave. I'd totally watch this,

"Inbreeds" is a verb, so maybe "inbreds" is more appropriate? "Homestead" tripped me up too - brought to mind visions of farming... Thoughts of children being terrorized and slaughtered gives me the ickies. Is the protag really a child or more of a teenager?

Appalachian inbreds break into a Beverly Hills mansion, terrorizing and slaughtering the family one by one, until one of the children escapes and gives the killers a taste of their own medicine.

or

When Appalachian inbreds break into his Beverly Hills home and terrorizes his family, the eldest son/daughter escapes and turns the tables on the home invaders.