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I just want? you to continue working on this idea.
It needs work as is, however the idea of stressed? fenle? hitman has some
bite to it.??????? Sort of like Mr. and Mrs. Smith.
Maybe a dark comedy?
You know, so many loglines here are just farfetched. Filled with ghosts, and
zombies, and? aliens. .... blah, blah, blah.
In my opinion, the concept at least has merit.
Hey guys,
Below is the updated Logline - your thoughts welcome, thanks.
A cash strapped hit-woman, must confront the demons of her past, while juggling the bone crunching world of professional hits and the guardianship of her deceased sisters kids.
Agree with Zentaneous.
It sets up an interesting Act 1 situation. ?Now what's the plot that arises out of the situation? ?It needs a (brief) description of Act 2 to be complete.