DoubleXX

Penpusher · 116 points

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Her Ranger squad K.I.A , team leader and lone survivor Jo Rose is dishonourably discharged. Now a cash-strapped hitwoman, with a sister fallen to cancer, Jo must navigate the vicious world of professional hits and custody of her sisters kids, while surviving merciless Rangers that seek revenge.

April 4, 2017
A cash strapped hit-woman, must confront the demons of her past, while juggling the bone crunching world of professional hits and the guardianship of her deceased sisters kids.

March 18, 2017
An overworked suburban mother and professional hit women, reaches breaking point as she struggles to juggle the work life balance.

June 21, 2016

on A cash strapped hit-woman, must confront the demons of her past, while juggling the bone crunching world of professional hits and the guardianship of her deceased sisters kids.

Hey,I have posted the updated Logline here -?goo.gl/6wZuwg Thanks
on A cash strapped hit-woman, must confront the demons of her past, while juggling the bone crunching world of professional hits and the guardianship of her deceased sisters kids.

Hey, Thank you for all your comments, much appreciated. A lot of good suggestions and points. I'm going to rewrite and re-post. Cheers.
on An overworked suburban mother and professional hit women, reaches breaking point as she struggles to juggle the work life balance.

Hey guys, Below is the updated Logline - your thoughts welcome, thanks. A cash strapped hit-woman, must confront the demons of her past, while juggling the bone crunching world of professional hits and the guardianship of her deceased sisters kids.