An overwhelmed single-father, hesitantly adopts the 10-year-old daughter of a former love who is about to die, only to learn the young girl is actually his.

Final Request

7 reviews

cicpisces 0 pts

Or you could make the story about a commitment phobic single man who agrees to adopt an ex-lovers child. Complications arise when the child turns out to be his.

Story would be more a drama about his struggle to accept being a father.

cicpisces 0 pts

As far I'm aware you tell acts 1 & 2 of the story. You wouldn't see the logline for Sixth Sense explaining he's already dead.

debbiemoon Penpusher · 26 pts

"Single father" definitely suggests he already has kids. Which detracts from the potential stress of adopting this kid, doesn't it?