An ex couple accidentally gets locked in the basement at a New Years Party and are forced to speak about their past, present and future.

Resolutions

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Kimmy Gorden 0 pts

If they are exes then (to me) the obvious time bomb is that someone is going to (re)marry very soon. Maybe the next day?
Don't know how to throw that in a concise line though-

"When former lovers accidentally lock themselves in a basement during a New Years party they are forced to speak about their past, present and an immanent wedding."

That's still off a little but do you see what I'm getting at? A marriage of one of them to someone else would be like a bomb to their relationship.

dnice1728 0 pts

Does it sound compelling? Because I was originally thinking that but I didn't think as far as a short film..if it would stick and keeps people attention.

dnice1728 0 pts

Yea, sort of but modern day version with a twist.

Peter Nguyen Penpusher · 1 pts

Two former lovers accidentally gets locked in the basement at a New Years Party and tries to get closure before one of them leaves the country ? forever!
The best example I got unless there is actually a ticking time bomb in the basement :O

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Two former lovers accidentally gets locked in the basement at a New Years Party and tries to get closure before one of them leaves the country ... forever!

The best example I got unless their is actually a ticking time bomb in the basement :O

dnice1728 0 pts

Can you give me some examples of time bomb in that situation? please

dnice1728 0 pts

I like former lovers. I wasn't sure how to get the right term for the log line. I appreciate the feedback. I am looking to shoot a short film.

dnice1728 0 pts

I was going for drama but comedy could work.

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Yes, I was going for a short. I do appreciate the feedback. I was thinking of a way to make it more compelling as far keeping the audiences attention.