An ex couple accidentally gets locked in the basement at a New Years Party and are forced to speak about their past, present and future.
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If they are exes then (to me) the obvious time bomb is that someone is going to (re)marry very soon. Maybe the next day?
Don't know how to throw that in a concise line though-
"When former lovers accidentally lock themselves in a basement during a New Years party they are forced to speak about their past, present and an immanent wedding."
That's still off a little but do you see what I'm getting at? A marriage of one of them to someone else would be like a bomb to their relationship.
Does it sound compelling? Because I was originally thinking that but I didn't think as far as a short film..if it would stick and keeps people attention.
Yea, sort of but modern day version with a twist.
Two former lovers accidentally gets locked in the basement at a New Years Party and tries to get closure before one of them leaves the country ? forever!
The best example I got unless there is actually a ticking time bomb in the basement :O
Two former lovers accidentally gets locked in the basement at a New Years Party and tries to get closure before one of them leaves the country ... forever!
The best example I got unless their is actually a ticking time bomb in the basement :O
Can you give me some examples of time bomb in that situation? please
I like former lovers. I wasn't sure how to get the right term for the log line. I appreciate the feedback. I am looking to shoot a short film.
I was going for drama but comedy could work.
Yes, I was going for a short. I do appreciate the feedback. I was thinking of a way to make it more compelling as far keeping the audiences attention.