Amid an increasingly deprived and poverty stricken human society, a group of young cows herd together to take down the UK government whose constant bickering and failed policies are corrupting their land and threatening their families lives.

Beasts

14 reviews

Tony Edward Samurai · 1,450 pts

Hi Jessica0703,

This sounds like a cracker -- It grabs me, I want to see it, my kids would want to see it. My only suggestion would be to have a play with "...whose constant bickering and failed policies..." -- I think if there was something the government was doing that was more of a specific threat to them it would make the stakes clearer, as in, you could lose "constant bickering" (although, it does work) and state what the failed policy(ies) is -- really no issue though, just an idea -- and Richiev's take on a potential title (if that's what it is) is pure gold.

Best of luck -- one of the best loglines I've read here in awhile...

Jessica0703 0 pts

It would be animated yeh, and a satire, hopefully thats coming across. By blowing them up with methane gas lol but didn't really want to reveal that at this point so left it out of the logline...