After waking from a coma, a heterosexual young woman begins to believe that the universe is plotting to put her in the arms of the female EMT that saved her life, and away from her male fiancee.

Signals From The Universe

10 reviews

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

Am not sure what a "...Type A..." is, do you mean blood type? If so this doesn't help clarify her stakes and goal nor does the political orientation of being a right-wing.
Better to pin up her personal beliefs and innate characteristics against her situation as obstacles to achieving her goal. Personal though not political or physiological these can be used to describe her character but don't seam to serve the logline in a way that makes it sound like a compelling story.

And there still seems to be a lack of a clear and tangible goal.

Here is an example of what I mean:
After waking from a coma an Amish woman finds herself attracted to the female EMT who rescued her she must now find a way to coexist with her husband and new lover.

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Waking from a coma, a right-winged Type A experiences a series of chance encounters with the lesbian EMT who rescued her that forces her to question her sexual orientation and her love for her male fianc?e.

Valentin Samurai · 2,423 pts

When a series of chance encounters with the lesbian EMT who saved her life made her question her sexual orientation, a button-up obedient pastor's daughter must choose between a boring life with her dull fianc? and her full of life adventurous soul mate.