After they were executed for their crimes, and instead of waking up in the afterlife, the eight found themselves on a ship that had anchored in the middle of the sea. The ship slipped into a whirlpool that took them to the shore of an island, where they saw horrors.

by Alan Smithee 20 pts

Lilies Glow

Short series -10 episodes
Science fiction- dark fantasy -psychological-drama-horror

By : Amany Amer
Amanyamer333@gmail.com

1 review

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

At this point, you have a premise but not yet a story. (At least by the logline)
To turn the premise into a story, you need a lead character, with a goal, and something standing in the way of that goal.
The premise sounds interesting.
Now it just needs an equally compelling lead character.