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I don't know who Laura Silan is, so don't mention her name.? Not until she's the next Harry Potter anyway.? :)
I'm getting a lot of unanswered who-what-whys.? ? HOW is she thrown into a world of secrets and mythology? WHO is the war against?? WHAT type of war?? WHY must she learn the secrets of her power?
I guess it might be hard to summarise in a few words, but it needs something, otherwise it's not clear.? I guess you know the important ones to answer.? e.g. The stakes? And which ones to leave out. e.g. "inadvertently", because it implies passivity.