Working for the dole at a front for a criminal syndicate, a young man with dreams to box in the Sydney Olympics has an altercation with a client at work — capturing the eyes of the Owner who offers him a more profitable career… Clashing with his values and dreams.

5 reviews

Caleb Tumanako Logliner · 355 pts

After a mild-mannered, capable young man resolves a conflict at his Work for the Dole job, he is offered a job by it's owner to provide for his disabled brother by being a henchman.

 

 

giannisggeorgiou Mentor · 4,754 pts

Plus, the logline is tooooooo long. Edit, edit, edit! Cut the details out and stick to the things we need to know: character, event, action. See the?Our Formula page.

giannisggeorgiou Mentor · 4,754 pts

Plus, the logline is tooooooo long. Edit, edit, edit! Cut the details out and stick to the things we need to know: character, event, action. See the?Our Formula page.