After she finds divorce papers, a desperate make-up artist goes to extreme measures to turn herself into her husbands ideal woman, but when she discovers that he actually dreams of becoming a woman she has to face what is really keeping them together.

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10 reviews

Tony Edward Samurai · 1,450 pts

some nice re-working throughout the thread.

Just a possibly whacky idea, and not the film you've got on your hands... but just fwiw:

When an out of work make up artist learns her husband wants a divorce because he thinks he's gay, she sets about becoming her husband's perfect partner... a man.

Best of luck.

allymay 0 pts

I agree, I need the right word to really describe this protagonist. She was a spunky, feisty, talented woman, but the loss of her child 5 years earlier derailed her. She is still trying to hold onto some part of her baby, so she clings to this marriage. Any thoughts on one descriptive word for that.

FFF Mentor · 7,850 pts

The new version is shorter and clearer, it's good!

I personally don't like "talented but derailed", if only you could find the magic one word that can describe the character in a unique way... it would be perfect. what about "fierce make up artist"? or "unrestrainable"? or...

I like the new version of the logline and the script could be really funny. And you have an excellent ending.