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After she finds divorce papers, a desperate make-up artist goes to extreme measures to turn herself into her husbands ideal woman, but when she discovers that he actually dreams of becoming a woman she has to face what is really keeping them together.
I agree, I need the right word to really describe this protagonist. She was a spunky, feisty, talented woman, but the loss of her child 5 years earlier derailed her. She is still trying to hold onto some part of…
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After she finds divorce papers, a desperate make-up artist goes to extreme measures to turn herself into her husbands ideal woman, but when she discovers that he actually dreams of becoming a woman she has to face what is really keeping them together.
Thank you all for your helpful comments. Here is a new version- When a talented but derailed makeup artist discovers divorce papers she desperately tries to save her marriage by transforming herself into her husbands ideal woman.
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Rudderless since returning from the Gulf, a sardonic veteran's hapless life gets a bump when he befriends a youth in need of a mentor, but in order to save his budding relationship with his young protege's mom he must shed his old skin and become the man everyone, including himself, needs him to be.
Though this sounds like a great story, the logline is a bit to convoluted for me to really get a good image of the movie in my mind. I agree with the other comments, simplify as much as possible while…
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?When an inexperienced journalist gets assigned to a military unit fighting in the second US civil war, he will have to fill the unlikely role of diplomat in order to prevent the war from reaching his home town.?
This logline works for painted a picture of the world of the film and the protagonists goal. I think it's a good job.
