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Who is the lead character? Because right now none of the characters seems to be likable.
Whose eyes do we see the story through and why are we pulling for one of the characters to succeed?
I would suggest: "When three estranged siblings learn their late father has left his substantial estate to his secret illegitimate daughter, they must...?? Maybe, work together to get their just deserts; which might be different than they had imagined.