After his wife dies in a car accident, a man must face homelessness raising his three daughters.

Less than Ned, an animated series by Seth MacFarlane.

5 reviews

Trix Samurai · 2,991 pts

Should this be in Examples?

yqwertz Mentor · 5,078 pts

The logical connection between the wife's death and family's homelessness is missing. In fact, I would claim the wife's death is not the inciting incident, rather the story starts when the man loses the house.

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When a single father of three, still mourning his beloved wife, loses his house to foreclosure, he struggles to keep his family safe and whole on the streets of LA (or whatever city you want to use for your story).

CraigDGriffiths 20,463 pts

Struggles with the people around him is a little vague.

If you give us a hint of that we will see how it impacts on the story.