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After being built as a cyborg by a fellow vampire, a young woman must race against time to kill vampires who tries to invade her town so that she can be human again.
What should the logline be? I'm confused also.
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After being built as a cyborg by a fellow vampire, a young woman must race against time to kill vampires who tries to invade her town so that she can be human again.
I revised it.
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A radio host finds herself caught between a mob boss, her boyfriend, a prostitute, drug lord and a CIA agent through a drug deal gone wrong.
I revised it.
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A college student is plagued with premonitions of trying to stop a space shuttle explosion that might kill him and his friends.
I kind of like this idea.
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A college student is plagued with premonitions of trying to stop a space shuttle explosion that might kill him and his friends.
He plans on saving others.
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A former child actor’s life has turned upside down when he mentors a teenage boy who looks like him during his younger days.
I changed it to former child actor.
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After killing the son of a biker, a fugitive decides to go the run with his estranged daughter.
What should the logline be like?
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A mercenary teams up with a prince to rescue a princess who was kidnapped by her father who is an evil emperor.
I'm done.
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A mercenary teams up with a prince to rescue a princess who was kidnapped by her father who is an evil emperor.
I revised it.
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Title: Curse
Genre: Anthology Drama
Series Logline: “In early 1800s America, an African slave is granted immortality and fights against the injustice facing the black community through the centuries as a vigilante.
Pilot Logline: After a slave is revived from the dead, he struggles to free the other slaves and kill his manipulative plantation owner.
Love the idea. looking forward into wanting to see it so bad.
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A mobster take down drug lords and rescues a former child actor before he dies.
I again revised it. 1) He was kidnapped by drug lords. 2) He must rescue him. 3) He has cancer. 4) He is a mobster.
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A mobster take down drug lords and rescues a former child actor before he dies.
I revised it.
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A computer hacker uses a computer that turns back time so that he stop a young woman turned cyborg from invading his town.
I revised it. What should be the goal?
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After a bandmate and childhood friend struggles with drug and alcohol addiction, three best friends must fight against losing their recording contract.
I fixed it.
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After a bandmate and childhood friend struggles with drug and alcohol addiction, three best friends must fight against losing their recording contract.
I revised the plot.
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A computer hacker uses a computer that turns back time so that he stop a young woman turned cyborg from invading his town.
I revised it.
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After his wife dies in a car accident, a man must face homelessness raising his three daughters.
What do you mean by Examples?
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In a world, where a city is constantly tormented by superhuman creatures called enigmas, three young adults, a cocky hothead, a blunt but caring diplomat, and an energetic adrenaline junkie, discover they?re a part of the enigma population but decide to use their powers to defend Apollo City.
Amazing idea for a script.
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When the city is devoured by war. A surviving girl on the verge of madness and a hungry old rat cross their lonely paths in order to find their salvation.
I love it. It reminds me of I Am Legend.
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After his wife of 48 years asks for a divorce, an eccentric old codger embraces single life and modern dating in the search for a new girlfriend.
It will be an awesome movie. Trust me, it is.
