AFTER A LONG ABSENSE FROM THE TSREET ACOP GOES BACK TO THE STREET TO DISCOVER A NEWLY INVENTED DRUG THE CRAZY IMPULSE DRUG WHICH MAKE PEOPLE BEHAVE STRANGELY.THE STRANGE BEHAVIOR LATER BECOME A TREAT TO THE CUMMUNITY.

BACK TO THE STREET.

4 reviews

Wilson Chan 0 pts

All caps and lots of spelling mistakes? That's it, no one's gonna take this seriously!

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Okay, that's interesting. Taking as read the need to turn off the caps lock and work on the spelling: what does the cop do about the situation? And why is he the only one who can save the day? The idea is good - now you need to find the compelling connection between that idea, and your character...

Karel Segers Samurai · 615 pts

John, you have posted 3 loglines. Can you please - in the spirit of this site - review 2 loglines for each (i.e. 8 loglines in total)?

Please also post loglines in normal, mixed case. ALL CAPS LOOKS VERY BAD.