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So their goal is to not be pulled apart? Is the action of the film couple's therapy? I'm being sarcastic I know but you didn't actually tell us much about what they'll need to DO.
It tells us Objective of the Antagonist rather than the Protagonist (also which of them is driving the plot?)
After becoming target to this hostile multinational, what becomes their GOAL?
That they are young, & 'how' their adversary plans to break them apart, seems redundant at this stage
It is also unclear how disgracing them can suppress this rare invention
Good Luck kbfilmworks