A woman who seduces and drugs men to steal from them must fight for her life after framing a man with a bizarre sleep condition by which a gate to hell is opened every time he sleeps.

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Robb Ross 3,175 pts

>> A woman who seduces and drugs men to steal from them

This is a comeuppance story, right? Even if yes, seems the details aren't necessary and it would be simpler to call her, for example, a con artist.

>> must fight for her life after framing a man with a bizarre sleep condition by which a gate to hell is opened every time he sleeps.

Intriguing setup. What is the fight...the objective and antag? Create a sense of what would happen in most of the script. Clarify if the protag's hell problem is one night or more.

The framing part is confusing and tips the right-wrong scale too much against her. Why isn't this guy her newest mark?