A witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.

A 7 minute Dramedy short film.

9 reviews

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

Your 25-word limit makes the logline kind of difficult, hope this helps!
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"When his best friend's mother is diagnosed with cancer, an emotional recluse must open his heart to help his friend through his heartbreaking trial."
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Hope this helped.

SSalvatore Samurai · 686 pts

My take:

"A witty comedian who fears showing his feelings must learn how to support an an old friend who is shattered by his daughter's cancer diagnosis."

I changed it from losing an old woman to losing a young woman, that is much more intense and difficult to process. Burying a child is perhaps the single most painful experience a parent can have.

Tjmohr Penpusher · 287 pts

thanks for all the feedback, really appreciate it:)!