In the middle of Nazi Germany, a shy girl and her imaginary monster try to rescue her father, who has disappeared.

Gracias Briancc!

An interesting and clear log line that puts the heart of the story front and center. It would certainly make me want to see the movie. Good job.

Gracias Jeff.

I can visualise the story pretty clearly. The shy girl (protagonist) faces up to both the Nazis and her own shyness (antagonists) in her search for her missing father (stakes). The imaginary monster is a nice add-on. I imagine it will help the girl out of some tricky situations, and the girl will realise in the end that she always had the power within her to help herself. I’d like to see this film.

With the support of stereotypes, I was able to advance part of the story.

I think this logline is solid because any questions I might have will probably be answered during the course of the story.

Character: Shy Girl
Goal: Rescue/Find her father
Outer Obstical: Nazi's
Inner Obstacle: She's shy but must go outside
Twist: There is an imaginary monster