A well-known psychiatrist in a small town encounters with the mental status of different patients wanting to become professional writers, but he realizes that his advice to them won’t work.

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Neer Shelter 55,464 pts

Agreed with Richiev and DPG.

The plot isn't clear, what specific event motivates him and what exactly is he motivated to do?

dpg 112,231 pts

>>>but he realizes that his advice to them won?t work.

FADE OUT to the? CREDIT ROLL? -- Is that how the story ends?? Or is it the inciting incident for a plot to follow?

If the former, a logline should never give away how the story ends.? If the latter, then what becomes his objective goal as a result?

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

What is the goal of the lead character?

(I just re-read this. Does the lead character want to become a professional writer? Or does his patients? The first time I read the logline it seemed as if the patients wanted to become professional writers but now I am not so sure that is what you meant)