A vengeance-driven PI hires an intellectual cat-burglar to help her investigate a murder that links a multinational tech giant to a notorious cybercriminal.

What makes an "intellectual" cat burglar qualified to investigate cyber crime? In my last job, I provided tech support for scores of "intellectuals" -- very smart people with advanced degrees in art, philosophy, history, etc -- but when it came to computer technology they were functional morons.

You've mentioned four separate characters/entities but I have no idea of anyone's goals or conflicts...

Agreed with the above comments also the logline doesn't describe a clear goal. It only says they will investigate a murder but then what? Put the CEO of the multinational giant in jail or kill him or her?

Hope this helps.