A vampire and vampire slayer living as roommates, hiding their identity, are secretly trying to kill each other, but fall in love in the process.

What do you guys think of this one? I thought this one was too wordy so that's why I was trying to cut it down. Also, I don't think you're supposed to put the ages of characters in your logline. I've never seen a logline with ages of the characters.

"After a lazy, lade back vampire runs out of body parts to suck blood out from his last female roommate, he finds a new sweet, innocent looking female roommate for a fresh kill, except she is a vampire slayer in training who must kill her first vampire as a final test, but when unnatural feelings grow for each other, things get complicated."

Quite like the sounds of this one. Although the info is pretty vague it does peak my interest. Maybe more about the ages of the characters would help me decide if it's for me. Possibly more of a comic angle if the film is going to be funny.

I ended up adding more detail to my logline since it was probably too vague before. Either I make my loglines too vague or too detailed.

"A vampire finds a new female roommate for a fresh kill, except she's a vampire slayer in training who must kill her first vampire as her final test, but unnatural feelings grow between them."

I guess this would be considered a dark romantic comedy.

Two roommates, a vampire and one vampire slayer