Automated Companion
When Doug, a loner agoraphobic, purchases a female robot to help construct a tunnel to connect with an outhouse. He is unprepared for interrogation in his private life about the disappearance of his wife.
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When Doug, a loner agoraphobic, purchases a female robot to help construct a tunnel to connect with an outhouse. He is unprepared for interrogation in his private life about the disappearance of his wife.
The relationship with the automated companion is what brings Doug to final get to the truth. It is the catalyst needed where previously he had been held back by his mental frailties.
I see but it doesn't come across that way in the logline.
Perhaps define his goal to be finding his wife then the obstacle, before a new version of the logline?
Sounds like the automated companion is more of a Scifi add on than an integral part of the story.
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Oops! Yes mixed up the boxes.
Driving force is for him to find his wife. Part of that is to overcome his agoraphobia which is why he needs to build the tunnel, to take him that further step to joining society.
The automated companion is the catalyst that helps him open up to the world and the truth about the disappearance of his wife.