gokulthedreamer

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Draft2: The Rough-Cut! A ?Thrill-Thirsty? son learns ?Knowledge is a double-edged sword? & promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Dad (a Celebrated-Police-Officer!). But the son is on the ?Other-Side? of the Law already. The Dad is not sure whom he must protect: The LAW of the Corrupt-Politicians or his SON who has taken their bait!?

December 10, 2015
A ‘Thrill-Thirsty’ son learns that ‘Knowledge is a double-edged sword’ and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a celebrated Police-Officer!).

December 6, 2015

on A trans-woman reflects on key moments in her life as a boy while visiting her home town to exact revenge against the man who had her wrongfully imprisoned.

1. I'm not sure if its ideal to use generic/vague words like "reflects & wrongfully" ; Could you be more specific!? 2. Can we know who "the man" is? Step-Father / Bully @ school / work-place / Manipulative-Ex-Boyfriend? 3. Most…
on Draft2: The Rough-Cut! A ?Thrill-Thirsty? son learns ?Knowledge is a double-edged sword? & promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Dad (a Celebrated-Police-Officer!). But the son is on the ?Other-Side? of the Law already. The Dad is not sure whom he must protect: The LAW of the Corrupt-Politicians or his SON who has taken their bait!?

First-Stop...Thanks!!! Now to answer u... It is ?the Fathers story. But yeah, u r right, i need to make it clear in the log-line too... :) Cheers!
on When an angel is tasked with showing a suicidal woman what the world would be like if she had never been born, he struggles to find a reason for her to live when they discovers it would be a vvastly better wold without her.

I suggest u chk out http://m.imdb.com/title/tt0038650/ Wil def help u make ur idea better...
on A ‘Thrill-Thirsty’ son learns that ‘Knowledge is a double-edged sword’ and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a celebrated Police-Officer!).

Thank You... made a lotta sense...! Here i go again: A ?Thrill-Thirsty? son learns that ?Knowledge is a double-edged sword? and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a Retiring-Celebrated Police-Officer!). But he is…
on An inexperienced detective finds evidence at a murder scene strangely matching that found at her mother?s death 20 years earlier and finds herself drawn into a vortex of deceit, terror and retribution

"An inexperienced detective finds evidence at a murder scene strangely matching that found at her mother?s death 20 years earlier and finds herself drawn into a vortex of deceit, terror and retribution" "Murder" is too OPEN, can be more specific…
on An atheist religious studies professor grieving the death of her mother is visited by a fatally wounded woman who falls into a coma after granting her god-like powers.

"An atheist religious studies professor grieving the death of her mother is visited by a fatally wounded woman who falls into a coma after granting her god-like powers." "atheist, religious-studies professor" : Protagonist, yes, but doesn't need to be this…

A ‘Thrill-Thirsty’ son learns that ‘Knowledge is a double-edged sword’ and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a celebrated Police-Officer!).