A struggling college student, plagued by his current state of being, discovers a device called the “God Helmet” and becomes the test subject for his Professor’s experiment.

I think this logline is essentially perfect.

Struggling with what? Debt or sanity? Who is his professor and what makes him unique or connected to the story (or even the God's helmet)? What is the God's Helmet? What is your protagonists 'state of being'? So many questions and not a single point is answered which would not sell your story.

Struggling with what? Debt or sanity? Who is his professor and what makes him unique or connected to the story (or even the God's helmet)? What is the God's Helmet? What is your protagonists 'state of being'? So many questions and not a single point is answered which would not sell your story.